Stupid English SAC

oh i'm writing this now because I was too pissed and lazy to write it earlier so im writing it now. lol

hmm well the stupid english sac sucked!!! i totally screwed it up and have no hope of actually getting more than 1 out fo 20 arg!!!! i reallie hate it.
i had the perfect plan. it was like.. like... perfect no fault in it well there were but not that many.
but when i started writing my mind went blank i couldent write there was no flow i couldent rember evidence i hand no structure. it was so bad!!! i even ran out of time to finnish my conclusion arg!!! i hate the english sac.
i'll like write my plan down now and then write what i actually wrote.

intro

para 1
- romulus' character.
- what his character is like
- kind, compassionate, truthful, hard working, honest

para 2
- link between his work and his character
- "his work was honest through and through like him"
- how his character is shown through his work and hwo it made his charactrer

para 3
- christine's betrayal
- the affairs with outher men
- her death
- affair with mitru
- incability to care for raimond

para 4
- lydia's betrayal
- married other man
- still came ova on romulus' money
- kept writing to romulus without telling him that she got married

conclussion
- his character
- like to work
- chrisitine and lydia's betrayal
- romulus' life a tragdy but him still being a man of character.


now what i wrote

intro

para 1
- his character shown by his compassion to goats!! (how stupid is that i wrote about goats)
- the character of his evident to others

para 2
- link between work and character(but badly written no structure)

para 3
- christine's betrayal
- her affairs with other men
-(also badly written with no coherency)

para 4
-lydias betrayal
- how romulus went to kill her husband
- how he showed some control over his actions by not killing him and waiting til morning

conclussion
- i never finnished my conclussion so i cant really say what i wrote

now u see how much i stuffed up lol umm im going to do anoter post after i post this one about today!!